[PATCH 2/4] install.html: general language fixes.

From: Érico Nogueira <ericonr_at_disroot.org>
Date: Sun, 13 Dec 2020 22:10:59 -0300
From: Érico Rolim <erico.erc_at_gmail.com>

---
 install.html | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/install.html b/install.html
index eaad4e1..f09e88b 100644
--- a/install.html
+++ b/install.html
_at_@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 <h2>Requirements</h2>
 
 <p>
-On Linux only ALSA headers and libraries are necessary:
+On Linux, only ALSA headers and libraries are necessary:
 
 <ul>
 
_at_@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ On Linux only ALSA headers and libraries are necessary:
 <h2>Download sources</h2>
 
 <p>
-Sources of the latest stable release (jul 11, 2020):
+Sources for the latest stable release (jul 11, 2020):
 
 <a href="sndio-1.7.0.tar.gz">sndio-1.7.0.tar.gz</a>
 
_at_@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ the server to stay in foreground):
 sndiod -dd
 </pre>
 
-In another window try to play a .wav file:
+In another window, try to play a .wav file:
 
 <pre>
 aucat -i /path/foo.wav
_at_@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ service sndiod start
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Make the daemon start automatically at system boot, do:
+To make the daemon start automatically at system boot, do:
 <pre>
 update-rc.d sndiod enable
 </pre>
_at_@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ systemctl start sndiod
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Make the daemon start automatically at system boot, do:
+To make the daemon start automatically at system boot, do:
 <pre>
 systemctl enable sndiod
 </pre>
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